Monday, October 7, 2013

Newer Storyboard

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  1. 56 seconds forward to 1:11 is still unclear
    1:23 to 1:34 needs some clarification as well
    1:53 to 1:56 needs to establish a season of time (winter) before spring can pop out
    2:05 needs a little longer to be busy looking over what needs to be done in the garden and start working and then turn (3-5 seconds)
    Does he not realize that she is stone?

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